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OLE MAC'

-Mike West



I live near a town called Hot Coffee on the Mississippi River, on a small farm with my family. I have two brothers and a sister.

We all have chores waiting for us after school. Mine are to feed the chickens and collect the eggs for Mama. My older brother Bobby chops wood for our heat and cooking. Mike, the youngest, is ten and the smartest of us kids--at least we thought he was. His job is feeding the mule, Ole Mac.

Ole Mac is nine years old and the best mule Daddy ever owned. Daddy speaks well about his strength and how easy he is to plow. Daddy is always saying "he's the best dang mule in the county." Mac stands 14 hands tall and 4 feet across the back. He is the biggest mule I've ever seen and according to Daddy, he is also the smartest.

One day Mike came by the chicken coop coming from the barn with a big smile.

"Why you smiling, Mike?" I asked, opening the coop gate and heading for the house.

"Oh nothin, nothin at all." He said with that big grin.

"Oh come on, what is it?"

"Nothin I said. Leave me alone." He ran ahead of me toward the house.

"Here you are, Mama." I said, handing her the ten eggs I'd collected.

"Not bad, Jimbo." I loved my Mama more than anything, but I wished she would stop calling me Jimbo. If she kept it up everybody would start doing it. Seeing my frown, she stirred my hair and beamed, "Sorry. I mean James." I smiled back at her.

"Thanks, Mama."

"You go wash up for supper now. Your daddy will be in from the field soon."


Washing my hands in the bathroom down the hall, I could hear her talking to Mike.

"Boy, what in the world are you so happy about?" she asked.

"Nothin Ma, I'm just smilin. Can't I smile?"

"Boy, when you smile I get worried," she laughed.

"Oh Ma, I ain't done nothin for you to worry about." I could hear the grin in his voice. I didn't know what Mike had done, but I knew it wasn't good. Mike was a smart kid--sometimes too smart for his own good.

Bobby was the oldest "14 an a half" he called himself. He wasn't the brightest boy you'd want to meet, but at 14 and standing 5'10" and all muscle, nobody at school said a cross word to him. His size also helped Mike and me, because they knew Bobby would help us.

On weekends, we'd go to the fields with Daddy and hoe corn. Kekulebusrs were bad that time of the year. A kekulebur is a plant that twists around the corn and kills it. So we had to make war on them every week during the growing season.

Bobby would do twice the work of Mike and me. Daddy was proud of us all and he told us so frequently, but we knew he took more pride in Bobby because of the work he could do. I heard Daddy tell Bobby one day he'd make a good farmer. He never said that to Mike or me, but both of us were good at school work. Bobby could hardly read or write, but he was a born farmer and he loved it.

We heard Daddy coming in because Ole Mac was making his usual hew hawing sound. He knew he was about to be fed. I went out onto the porch and watched Daddy pull the harness off the mule.

Daddy waved for me to come to the barn. I knew what he wanted. Twice a week, Ole Mac got brushed down good. Daddy said brushing help keep the flies off his rump. We always laughed when he said that. It wasn't what he said, but the way he said it. That was one thing Daddy could do--make us all laugh.

"James, you get through brushing Mac, put him in his stall, said Daddy. "Don't take too long brushing him or he'll bite you. Ole Mac's hungry and ain't going to wait long."

I said I'd be quick.

"You better or Mac will take a chunk out of your arm," Daddy said with a grin. He went toward the tack room with the harness. Daddy always soaped the harness once a week. It kept the leather from cracking.

"You finished yet?" Daddy asked.

"Yes sir, I'm done."

"Well, put Mac into his stall and let him eat. Then you come on to the house so we can eat supper."

"Yes sir, I'll be right there." I led Ole Mac into his stall and he went straight to his trough. I watched him for just a second. He stuck his head down into the trough and then pulled it back quickly. I thought I should go in and check his feed but I've seen rats get into the trough before and Ole Mac would run them out without any problem. So, thinking that it was a rat, I headed to the house for supper and thought no more about it.

"What we eating tonight, Mama?" I asked pulling the lid off the stew pot.

"Boy, you know better than to do that. Where you been anyway? I thought you were in your room with your brothers doing homework."

"I was down in the barn brushing Ole Mac."

"Well you better go wash up again. Supper will be on the table in just a minute."

"Ok."

"James, did Ole Mac start eating?" Daddy asked, coming out of theonly bathroom all six of us had to use.

"No sir. I think there was a rat in his feed trough."

"Ole Mac knows how to take care of a little rat," said Daddy.

"Yes sir, he does. I've seen him pick them up and bite them right in half."

"I pity any rat that bothers Mac's food," Daddy said, smiling. "You hurry up now before all the food is gone. You know how your brothers are about squirrel hash."

"Squirrel hash? Oh boy, we haven't had that in a long time."

"James, you like anything your mother makes," Daddy said, patting my shoulder.

I got to the table just before Daddy asked the blessing, something he did before every meal. My sister Pam and Mama got up after the blessing to bring in the stew pot of squirrel hash. Pam took the lid from the pot and the smell was wonderful. The whole family loved squirrel hash-- except for Pam. She wouldn?t eat it because she loved to watch squirrels run in the trees and out on the yard. To her, it would be like eating a pet.

Squirrel meat is some of the best eating in the world. It has a hard gamey taste to it. That means it's just a little bitter; not too much but just right.

Last Sunday afternoon we boys had gone hunting and got luckly. We'd killed seven squirrels, but none of them were from around the house. When we go hunting for squirrel, we go over to the Sims' farm, because of Pam. One time we hunted near the house and killed four squirrels. Pam saw us and cried out, "Stop killing my squirrels!" It took her two months to forgive us.

From that time on, we always hunted over in our neighbor's woods. Pam was a year younger than Bobby, but she had the strongest will of any of us and we knew better than making her cross. And too, she helped Mama cook; if we got her too upset, who knows what we might find on our supper plates.

The next day after school I was in the chicken coop doing my chores when I heard Daddy coming in from the fields. He was coming in earlier than usual. I also couldn't hear Ole Mac's hawing, the mule knowing it was close to feed time.

"Daddy, you all right?" I asked, worried that he might be sick or hurt.

"I'm fine, but I think Mac is coming down with something."

"What's the matter with him?" I asked, walking to the barn with a basket of eggs.

"I don't know, he just seemed to be weak. He started slowing down about noon." Daddy said, He lead Mac into the barn and started pulling the harness off him. He put his hand on Mac's nose.

"What you doing Daddy?" I didn't understand why he was touching Mac's nose.

"I'm seeing if he's got a fever."

"Is it hot?" I asked.

"No, but it sure feels strange. There's little pits on his nose."

"What's a pit?"

"Little holes. I didn't notice them this morning. I guess it was still too dark."

"You didn't see them all day?" I asked puzzled.

"Son, when I'm plowing, I walk behind Ole Mac."

"You reckon it was the rat in his trough yesterday?"

Daddy took a close look. "It's not rat bites. It looks like somebody took an ice pick to him." Daddy rubbed Mac's nose. When he did Ole Mac hew hawed in pain and stepped back on Roger, our dog. Roger jumped up and ran out of the barn, yapping like the devil was after him.

"Go look after Roger and make sure he ain't hurt." Daddy said.

I found Roger lying under the porch whining. I called him out and he crawled to me and licked my hand. Checking him over I saw no broken bones or blood and his tail was wagging. I knew then he was all right.

I went back to the barn and saw Daddy in Ole Mac's stall. I'd never seen Daddy with such anger on his face before.

"Daddy, you ok?"

He looked at me not saying a word. Coming out of the stall he said,
"Go get me the hammer."

"The hammer?"

"Yes, get me the hammer," he yelled, pointing toward the tack room. His face then softened and he said, "I'm sorry son, I'm not mad at you." Relieved, I went to the tack room and found the hammer. When I handed it to Daddy he said, "I want you to go and get Mike right now." He turned going back into Mac's stall.

As I was going to the house for Mike I heard some hammering in the barn. I thought it funny for Daddy to start building something after he'd been in the fields all day.

Mike was in our bedroom doing his homework.

"Daddy wants to see you out in the barn." Mike's face went white.

"What's Daddy want with me?" Mike asked. He got up and walked to the window, looking down toward the barn. He seemed scared.

"I don't know, but he sure looked mad," I said.


When we got to the barn, the hammering had stopped.

"Daddy, did you want to see me?" Mike asked in an innocent voice.

"I do young man. Come into the stall. I want to ask you a question."

Mike looked at me and opened the stall door. I walked in right behind him. Ole Mac was in another stall eating like I'd never seen Mac eat before. He ate like he was starving.

Daddy was standing next to the trough. Daddy asked Mike, "Did you feed Mac yesterday?"

Mike looked at the trough and said, "Yes sir I did." Daddy's face went red all of a sudden.

"Boy, what were you thinking of?" Daddy yelled.

"I don't know." Mike said, almost crying. I didn't understand what was going on.

"You know you could have killed Ole Mac. He helps this family to make a living, and you just about killed him. What have you got to say for yourself?"

Mike was crying by then and he blubbered out, "I'm sorry Daddy I didn't think it would hurt for awhile.

"Wouldn't hurt? You could have starved Ole Mac to death. That Ole mule works hard everyday, and the only thing he gets is his feed. You took that away from him."

"I'm sorry Daddy, I didn't think about that." Daddy moved toward Mike. Mike backed up, thinking Daddy was going to hit him. Daddy stopped right in front of him.

"Don't worry son, I'm not going to hit you, but I think you will wish I had. For the next six months, you?ll not only feed Mac you?ll also brush him down every day. You will also soap the harness once a week. On the weekends, you'll not go fishing or hunting, because you'll be too busy working. You?ll do all the chores except chopping wood. Do you understand what I'm saying?"

Mike, with his head down and still crying, answered. "Yes sir, I understand." Mike and Daddy might understand, but I didn't.

Daddy walked out of the stall with his hand on Mike's shoulder. It had something to do with Ole Mac's feed. I looked at the trough, and couldn't see anything that would explain what was going on.

I bent down and looked under the trough. To my amazement, saw the head of about twenty 16 penny nails sticking out of the bottom of the trough. That was what the hammering was about, Daddy had driven the nails out of the trough. Mike had stuck nails up into the trough so Ole Mac couldn't eat, so he wouldn't have to feed Ole Mac everyday.

Mike wasn't as smart as he thought. He figured that out long before the six months were up.




(c) 2000 by -Mike West



Michael David West has beeb writing for about four years. He thought it would be easy but quickly learned that it has many ups and downs. West considers himself a simple story teller who writes of the things that have meaning to him. This is his first publication.


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